Ok, so I deciyded I riyt som of me own poetree an yoo can add yor stuff ere as well. Cos that wot this post is for.
1] If it a song then tell evreebodee wat moosic it to, an put a link to it.
2] Then say abowt yor poem and say wot it abowt, an yor inspirayshun.
The Tewn
I wos listenin to a well niyc song, an it like from Soweto in South Africa, but it not. It by a band oo normalee do lowds of cool ambient moosik, but this won diffrent. It calld Election Day an it by The Normalities. An yoo can listen to it free or buy the howl album for 99p! It at www.junodownload.com/labels/Subatomic/releases
An I reellee liyked the well gud simpl melodee an rithum. An I been hummin it for ayges now, an finkin of words to it. It be best if yoo listen to the moosic first then yoo av the tewn in yor ed.
The Song
So I rowt this for skool (That why it in English an not Tiglish). It well eesee to wriyt short liyns liyk this an get fings to riym.
An I well cheesd off wiv wot us kids av to put up wiv from the ‘grownups’ an bullees, an wot they doin to ower world. So it abowt that it up to us to chayng it cos the grownups forgot abowt wot they dreemd wen they kids, an jus carrid on rekin ower world for us. An it jus follows me day at skool, an wot I finkin an learnin, an wot I gonna do wiv all me new nowlij.
Change a Day
The sun shines through
My window pane
It wakes me up
To start again
We toiling hard
To fill our brain
The games we play
The bullys pain
We stand in line
We join the class
We wait a while
Our turn to pass
We take it in
What they say
Our minds are filled
For another day
We work our brains
To find out why
that some live well
And some must die
We learn the lesson
Of days gone past
We learn them quick
We learn them fast
We break the day
With play and fun
Our life on Earth
Has just begun
We join the games
The playing field
The acting out
But we must yield
To others’ might
And grownup voice
When we grow up
We have the choice
To follow on
Like every one
Did in the past
How long to last?
Until we see
By following
That we’re as bad
As grownups’ sin
We must brake free
And change for good
And squash the bad
‘Cos we know we should
‘Cos if we follow
Like loads of sheep
Then gronwups’ world
Is ours to keep
Unless we use
The lessons told
And make a world
For when we old
So as I lie
And watch the sun
I know that my
Day has begun
And I have the choice
Like every day
To change the world
For a better way
Tiger
Very nice, Tiger!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of a link to the music that you wrote this to. I also would like the music!
Your lyrics fit well and offer an interesting message.
You should do more of these!
I have one I wrote years ago, if I can find the tune, I shall post it.
I jus lissenin to this song by Pinky Floydulatory an I fink it well cool an well sad lyrics. So I fort I put it here!
ReplyDelete"When The Tigers Broke Free"
It was just before dawn
One miserable morning in black 'forty four.
When the forward commander
Was told to sit tight
When he asked that his men be withdrawn.
And the Generals gave thanks
As the other ranks held back
The enemy tanks for a while.
And the Anzio bridgehead
Was held for the price
Of a few hundred ordinary lives.
And kind old King George
Sent Mother a note
When he heard that father was gone.
It was, I recall,
In the form of a scroll,
With gold leaf and all.
And I found it one day
In a drawer of old photographs, hidden away.
And my eyes still grow damp to remember
His Majesty signed
With his own rubber stamp.
It was dark all around.
There was frost in the ground
When the tigers broke free.
And no one survived
From the Royal Fusiliers Company C.
They were all left behind,
Most of them dead,
The rest of them dying.
And that's how the High Command
Took my daddy from me.
Hi Tiger!
ReplyDeleteYour lyrics sound really great! I love your words.
Well done ;-)
Glenn
Miley song (its got the most moving lyrics ever!)
ReplyDeleteI can almost see it
That dream I'm dreaming but
There's a voice inside my head sayin,
You'll never reach it,
Every step I'm taking,
Every move I make feels
Lost with no direction
My faith is shaking but I
Got to keep trying
Got to keep my head held high
There's always going to be another mountain
I'm always going to want to make it move
Always going to be an uphill battle,
Sometimes I'm gonna to have to lose,
Ain't about how fast I get there,
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb
The struggles I'm facing,
The chances I'm taking
Sometimes they knock me down but
No I'm not breaking
I may not know it
But these are the moments that
I'm going to remember most yeah
Just got to keep going
And I,
I got to be strong
Just keep pushing on, cause
There's always going to be another mountain
I'm always going to want to make it move
Always going to be an uphill battle,
Sometimes I'm gonna to have to lose,
Ain't about how fast I get there,
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb
There's always going to be another mountain
I'm always going to want to make it move
Always going to be an uphill battle,
Sometimes you going to have to lose,
Ain't about how fast I get there,
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb
Keep on moving
Keep climbing
Keep the faith baby
It's all about
It's all about
The climb
Keep the faith
Keep your faith
It's amazing. my fave song ever!!!!
and ur poems r amazing!!!!! my bff emily writes song lyrics.. she has like 40 songs... and they are the best lyrics in the world.. mine... not so much... but ur r really good! im more of like.. a sad poem, suicide.. homocide... kind of writer.. and no im not emo... sad poems sound better when rhyming...
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